Well in January only
work of Porter and in February I went to two places, first place was Puerto
Saavedra where I was two weeks camping with my Scout Group in which I went
through many beautiful like the Imperial River, Lake Budi, places the city of
Carahue and Temuco, I ate many things with potatoes, which people to instantly
they were very nice and we received well everywhere that we went, because
completed the camp, I went to Viña del Mar beach, with my childhood friends for
a week, which rent a house on a hill, there is we share as always we take drank beer and swam much on the beach
of Los Lobos and Reñaca and we cooked our food pizza ,
noodles and rice with meat or viennese, also did many nights roast to share,
because coming to Santiago I stayed at home and went out sometimes with friends
in the afternoon I was with my mom and my niece also that week cook delicious
things and already four days before entering the University went to play
football with my friends and fracture I left foot which I've been much care to
return to play again.
Hi Pablo, I see you a lot of fun much this summer. It's so cute that even participate in scout group and in my opinion it's very cool experience!!
ResponderBorrarWell, have a nice day!
Pablo,
ResponderBorrarWC: 200. Excellent. I am sorry about your foot. Be careful. You know you should edit your text in a much better way. Please, consider these comments:
…Well in January I only workED AS A ( of) Porter
…THE first place was Puerto Saavedra
… many beautiful PLACES like the Imperial River, Lake Budi, places LIKE the city of Carahue and Temuco
…which people (to) instantly? (;)
… they were very nice and we WERE received well everywhere that we went,
…because completed the camp(?)
…,WE (hich) rentED a house on a hill, (there is we share as always we take) (??)
… meat or (Viennese) SAUSAGES also WE MADE A BARBECUE?(did) many nights (roast) to share,
…because??? coming to Santiago
…also that week cook (COOKED? WHO COOKED?) delicious things and already four days before entering the University I went to play football with my friends and (fracture I) BROKE MY left foot which I've been TAKING much care OF to return to play again.
Cheers,